Friday 23 January 2015

-Pitch & Feedback-



This is my audience profile. It is a brief description of what my artist is aiming for and what the type of people my artist have are like.







Feedback Sheet

I showed my class my pitch and they gave me some feedback on what i am doing right, what they liked and what i could improve:

















What is working well so far is that i have the RnB genre evident, i have used Goodwins elements good and my narrative is clear. Things that i need to develop is to include the record label. And things that i need to work on is the location shot and first shoot.

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